Finished Caramel Chloroform!

Caramel Chloroform: My Fuyumi/Nemuri Yakuza Fake Dating Non-Con/Dub-Con Slow Burn/Pining Angst with a happy ending! It was loosely based on The Raid 2, a violent indonesian martial arts movie. 

The first writing of this length (almost 90k) I actually finished! A huge achievement for me in many ways, not least of which is being able to wrangle that ADHD into finishing a project. (wanted to do a little writeup but didn't have time till now)

I'm largely happy with it. The pining, fluff and tension felt great. Chuffed with the fight scenes, I tried to get them all with a different style or flow, while also hooked to a story beat. Nemuri's martial arts and her quirk tactics, and Fuyumi's water/bloodbending developments are things I'm really proud of. Fuyumi ESPECIALLY deserves it.

Nailed the sex. It's the exact dub-con/dub-con-non-con stuff that I wanted to hit, with weird violent sex between two broken women who won't talk about it, but who are deeply into each other. I liked the turnabout of Fuyumi fantasizing about getting taken advantage of and then being the one to take advantage of Nemuri later on.

OTHER STUFF
1. This title makes me cringe every time I see or think it, no joke. Too late to change it, and at least it's distinct.

( 2. Biffed the ending by changing it twice. )

( Hiroki )

( What next? )

Overall, yay me! That's a big accomplishment for me so I'm going to reward myself for it.